Nov. 30 '12
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wine castle liquor store
Doesn\'t look very convincing. The mark does not come together and form an element. Type looks boring...IMO
thanks for your opinion
I\'m happy to give constructive criticism is always
I think it has potential ... If I where you I would make it more simple and pure ... ok !?
maybe ... I also already see that it can be improved, but I do not know whether you can do it now)
Maybe you could remove the bottle and make the castle more in the shape of a wineglass? Just thinking out loud. ;)
there as a bottle and two glasses on the sides ... I do not know much right?
as I mentioned before ... this one has potential ... ;D
Nice concept. I think it would work better if the glasses were in a solid fill, no outlines.
@dandivin: I have no idea what you are trying to say.
i think i thiner Door / wine it could work!
How many times we\'ve seen a bottle with wineglasses lately when it comes to create a logo that reads \" wine \" first??? Too many times and it\'s getting boring, very boring - isn\'t? It\'s overdone big time,amen. I would let go entirely a bottle with two wineglasses from this concept and made a logo by using either a corkscrew in a shape of a castle or a corkscrew lifting a cork in a shape of a castle... Even a letter \" W \" can be done in a shape of a castle. I prefer logos being done from letters - it is always a much sharper execution. Anyhow, fellow don\'t give up on this one, yet - there are ways to make your concept to the level that you want to achieve. Hope that you don\'t mind my constructive criticism here.
Thanks I have already said, the criticism is useful, I listen
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