by slaterdesign • Uploaded: Sep. 30 '11 - Gallerized: Nov. '11
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This is a personal project I am working on for myself.
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Unused proposal
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You could probably remove the dividing line and move the type over. I like it though.
ReplyThanks guys! Really dig your feedback!
Replysolid work Nick:)
ReplyThanks man!! That means a lot bud!
ReplyI don't like the thick, pill outline. I'd remove the dividing line, bring the type closer and lose that heavy line so it doesn't over power the stone house.
ReplyIf you are married to the pill shape, still drop that heavy line and simply extend the line that outlines the bottom (the green lawn part) up and over the house and put in a complimentary blue for the sky inside.**This feels like it should be simple and straight forward, but instead has been dressed up a little too much. Take some of the accessories away.
Replywell deserved
Replywowwow ... great piece of art !
ReplyNice nice nice, as always bud!
ReplyWOW! THanks everyone for the kind words!!! I'm surprised that my logos are good enough to get on the featured page!
ReplyNick, of course you are good enough, I also postulate you to be a part of the featured showcases.
ReplyThanks Rudy!! That means sooo much to me!!
ReplyGood job dude.
Replyi like the way typo corresponds with general style of sign
ReplyLove it, Nick! Congrats on the gallery spot! I do agree with Trish's comments up there about the thick-stroked pill shape and vertical divider line detracting from the otherwise pleasant simplicity of the mark, though.
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