northzone

by contrast8 • Uploaded: Apr. 12 '10

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JoePrince Apr. 12 '10

I like the idea, but I feel it's lacking in execution. You have too many different/weird colors and shades in the mark that make it confusing to look at. I don't think the stroke is fairing well for it either. The Z is more visible than the N which seems contradictory seeing as NorthZone starts with a N. Maybe rotating the mark 90 degrees either way would fix that. I think the type is very nice though and fits well with the mark.

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contrast8 Apr. 12 '10

thank you JoePrince, i changed collors for N, maybe now better. imo strokes gives feel of rotation, or i am wrong?**

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JoePrince Apr. 12 '10

The mark still feels too cluttered and complicated IMO. I would suggest cleaning it up and not use as many colors. The fact that you have overlapping shapes is busy enough, no need to make it more complex by adding several colors to it.

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kugelis Dec. 15 '10

jega, fainas, patinka, labas, volelis

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logomotive Dec. 15 '10

I kinda like the mark as is, very abstract. The type is what I think needs work, IMO.

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contrast8 Dec. 15 '10

aciu:D waiting new work from you

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