by SamDeMastrie • Uploaded: Aug. 01 '11 - Gallerized: Sep. '11
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T-shirt design for Weber State University's West Center. The center is an off-shoot of the main campus, and is located further west, in a fairly rural area populated by a lot of farmers and cowboys.
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very nice dtf!
ReplyMany thanks Bernd.
ReplyNice one, Sam. I'm nit picking here, but i think it could use a slightly lighter background and scaled down a little bit.
ReplyThanks Nick. How's it look now? I don't want to go too small or else the detail will deteriorate.
ReplyI love line art like this. LOVE IT.
ReplyThanks Jon. It was super fun to do.
ReplyNice job on those changes, Sam. Its perfect!
ReplyThis is looking great. The one little detail and I'm being nit picky here is. The horizontal shading lines are kinda competing with the roundness of center and banners. I would suggest creating more circular shading lines and keep the sharp highlight effect as you have it. In other words just make the Lines on star points follow contour of circle and banners.Hope it makes sense. regardless very nice and clean.
ReplyI would also recommend starting the inside line where it meets circle and ending at ball points, spacing accordingly. Details UGHH
ReplyI hear ya, Mike. Those are all great suggestions. Unfortunately, this got rejected. Still pretty excited for the gallery though.
ReplyMy Bad. You had actively seeking critiques checked.
ReplyNo, my bad, I forgot to change the status. Regardless of what they say though, I'm always interested to hear what people have to say. Thanks for your comments.
ReplyNice.. I like the old style :)
ReplyIndeed thats an old style, but great anyway!
Replyyeah nice one sam, this is also great.
ReplyThanks people. :)
ReplyI like that. West Sherif Star = Awesome
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