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Kevin...this is very nice and smoothing man! The only thing that worries me is at the thumbnail size man the text and mark is hard to see. Maybe a tad darker shade of gray and a thicker stroke? I dunno!?!

Dude, I couldn't help but think the same thing in regards to the shade of gray. I think that helped the line weight too? Thanks, buddy!!

Ocular, I think this is great! And I love the perspective feature.**Maybe I'm wrong but the space between the O and C seems to be a little too much.

Howdy Kev,**Agree with all of the above...tis a great piece, well done.

Climax beat me too it - I was going to suggest you sweeten up your kerning of both the %22FLO%22 in FLOCK, and the %22TAI%22 in ENTERTAINMENT. Also, I'm not convinced the 'wireframe' is the best approach with the mark. Even if its really faint shades of grey, I think it would have more pull.**-Brian

Thanks everyone for all the constructive feedback. So very helpful. I have so much to learn. FLOCK type has been adjusted. :-)

Perfect.

I agree with it being %22effortless.%22

:) Thanks to both of you!!

Did anyone notice the bird shapes? Just curious. Or is that a stretch?

I saw them without being prompted dOc.

Yippee!! :-D

Terrific concept and execution! Got it right away...

flock me!.. never saw the birds.. nice!

I noticed the birds Kev :) Excellent concept mate!

I've always liked this one, Kev. Well deserving of a gallery spot :)

This is great**I was thinking most title screens on film aren't usually upon white. An alternative version with filled %22wings%22 and a neutral to the opposing wing would look great.

Thanks you guys. I'm glad the birds are coming through.**@ webcore : If I remember to, I'll post up an alternative version. That sounds like a nice idea.**Peace!

They're some cool birds you got there.

So simple... just brilliant.

http://www.crowdspring.com/projects/graphic_design/logo/leading_web_software_company_needs_logo_redesign/gallery/3d_by_kikk

Thanks Jess, Dan and Sindur. Sindur, thanks for the link. :-)