Cafe News

by LloydCreative • Uploaded: Jul. 15 '08 - Gallerized: Jul. '08


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Description: Identity created for regular newsletter that covers information pertinent to the local café scene in our region.
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Tags: salt shaker news cafe salt shaker

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OcularInk Jul. 15 '08

Man, you are clever!

hindmarshdesign Jul. 15 '08

Woah! So many elements of thought! I love the salt shaker mic. Great text.

Jeff Fisher LogoMotives Jul. 15 '08

I think the concept is incredible. However, the graphic of the mic/shaker gets a little complicated with the bolts coming off of it.

BigAl67 Jul. 15 '08

Thanks for your feedback people... means a lot coming from talents such as yourselves. Probably agree with you Jeff re the complexity - might need to tweak it once the client comes back to me. I'm a big believer in less is best.

BigAl67 Jul. 16 '08

Thanks again for comments... new, simplified version now uploaded. Has definitely improved the clarity of the concept.

OcularInk Jul. 17 '08

Nice improvement. I think Jeff was spot on with his comment. Hope you don't mind, but I'd like to be nit-picky for one second. Why does the 's' in 'News' seem jagged in comparison to the other letters?

BigAl67 Jul. 17 '08

Yeah Ocular - the odd line in the 's' seems to a quirk of the logo reproducing at this size at 72ppi. The curve actually travels in a smooth line in the vector file. Thanks for the eagle eyes though.

OcularInk Jul. 17 '08

Okay, just checkin'. %3B-) Keep up all the great work!


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