spatulove

by struve • Uploaded: Mar. 19 '09 - Gallerized: Jan. '13

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Paul Rand Mar. 19 '09

Nice colors and illustration.**It seems that SPAuLOVE should fit in the banner*without all the empty space above it.

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theartistt Mar. 19 '09

either put the u down or put the cut out piece below instead of above.

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struve Mar. 20 '09

i updated this, now i think it fills the space better vertically. thanks for the suggestions.

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sdijock Mar. 20 '09

It's a definite improvement over the last version, but I still think your banner is way too deep for your type - the banner really overwhelms it and the type is looking a little lost in there. Reduce the overall banner height and you'll have a home-run.**The logo is really nice overall though.

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struve Mar. 20 '09

@sdijock: i'm not disagreeing with you, but i really don't want the type to feel like it fills up the whole banner-- ya know, i want there to be plenty of space around the type so it doesn't feel cramped in there.%0D*i feel like if i make the banner smaller the type would feel cramped. %0D*%0D*i'd love to know if more people feel the same as you, then maybe i'll try it.%0D*%0D*thank you for your critique.

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logoholik Mar. 20 '09

I think it is perfect now.

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sdijock Mar. 20 '09

@struve - You have every right to disagree with me - it's your logo - you won't offend me. Don't ever feel that you need to apologize to anyone for having a different opinion about something that you've created (except for the client).**As previously stated, it's still a nice logo.

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theartistt Mar. 20 '09

I have to agree that it is a little loosie goosie in there. you wouldn't have to remove very much of the height to improve it visually. tiny tweaks people!

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struve Jul. 30 '10

thank you chad. you have a very nice portfolio btw.

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