Word of Faith

by mfrank • Uploaded: Jul. 28 '10

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Description: Word of Faith church creates a people-orientated atmosphere and hold outreach programs for the local public. Update from http://logopond.com/gallery/detail/111303
Status: Client work
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raja Jul. 28 '10

powerful line work (both concepts)**the lettering... crowded? I think you can pair it better as this mark is super**Have you tried centering the layout - would make it more grand and less product/service like

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OcularInk Jul. 28 '10

Ah, I'm liking this one too. Nice update. I'd like to see Raja's suggestions implemented. The center layout could work out well. You might even try giving the type some serious tracking to offer a nice sense of elegance. Just an idea, though, may not work.

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mfrank Jul. 28 '10

Thanks for the feedback raja and kevin. Like usual I'm struggling with pairing the type. I'm not satisfied with it either. I will try out both ideas.

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nitish.b Jul. 28 '10

i am not getting what the mark symbolizes..:( i would love to know, franky

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OcularInk Jul. 28 '10

It resembles a figure with his/her arms outstretched as if worshiping. I can also make out the fish symbol.

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brandsimplicity Jul. 28 '10

Beautiful work, looking forward to seeing the vertical layout.

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mfrank Jul. 29 '10

Updated to a centered layout.

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AMP Jul. 29 '10

I liked it before, but I like it better this way (vertical). very nice.

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thomas Jul. 30 '10

Nice update Matthew. Like very much this one.

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brandsimplicity Jul. 30 '10

Great job, it now feels more outreaching.

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raja Jul. 31 '10

hey mfrank - glad to see you are open to make changes.**why are you keeping the descriptor line so small, in italics, so crowded, and so close to the name?**you can go really BIG with this idea if you pay attention to the most basic of design principles

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mfrank Aug. 02 '10

Hey Raja thanks for all the feedback...it's appreciated. I've updated per your comments and it looks a ton better. I'll keep messing with the spacing between the mark/name/descriptor some more and overall size.

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mabu Aug. 11 '10

Great line work. Nice colors too.

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Danielp Feb. 06 '13

Beautiful symbol, love the eloquence.

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