Undu Rev1

by makote • Uploaded: May. 19 '07 - Gallerized: May. '07


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Description: I made some little changes to it mostly on the left u's and also im trying 2 color combos
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Lets Discuss

OcularInk May. 20 '07

On the bottom U where it is cut off on the left, can you try cutting it at the same curve of the first U at the left? This way it won't be so abrupt. Does that make sense? It would also be cool to see a version where none of the letters connect to make the mark. You would read Undu and it would still create the same interesting shape. Just typing out loud. I still really like this. :-)

makote May. 20 '07

Gona try that kevin I really appreciate the comments since when working for one self, we dont have an art director or a client to refer to, Thanx for the comments greatly appreciated.

kosta May. 21 '07

To be honest, I would only leave that little UNDU in white :)

makote May. 21 '07

then it would only be type and have no meaning so, thats not an option atm for me, though Im really thinking of leaving the white part out*

mc May. 22 '07

i liked the first version, not so crazy bout the grandient, but the shape made with the letters is strong and original.

daleharris May. 28 '07

truly inspired work makote. i am a fan.

RickDT May. 28 '07

Wow, that's great! I love the shape, it's wonderful. I prefer the gradient and I do like the colors. I wonder if you can push them more toward a gold and fuscia (on my screen it looks yellow %26 pink)? It seems to want that retro-classy look to my eye :)

reds May. 28 '07

i'm not sure how the previous versions look like but i'll always love ingenious manipulations of characters to form logos. good work!

Craven91 May. 31 '07

I agree with Ocularlink - the second U (as it is now) is throwing off the design.%0D*%0D*It doesn't read as well as the first three letters.

akitash Jun. 03 '07

it's perfect, i like it!

koriman Jun. 06 '07

Wow!, I really like it too. You got something there... Keep the style. Not so crazy about the colors but it works.

sisudesigns Jun. 08 '07

I think this is unique. I prefer the white treatment, I dont know if this needs a symbol. I'd try that color treatment on the unDu on its own, maybe connect the type the way you have it. it looks modern.

arad Jul. 02 '07

nice! i like it!

omerbey Dec. 29 '07

reminds me of dedeman:*http://www.dedeman.com/**and a few other logos. still nice. *

FUTY Jan. 17 '08

Probably someone already mentioned it, the proportion letters and image... I would scale the letters up to 125%25 of now... still, clever concept, nice logo!

criaojos Sep. 15 '10

No necesita el iso. Basta con la tipo.


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