undu

by makote • Uploaded: May. 06 '07

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Art Machine May. 06 '07

I love the mark saying undu and the type is also nice!**But I think another color would strenghten the mark a lot more than the current one. **Anyway an outstanding piece.

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makote May. 06 '07

Thank you for your coments, I'm not settled yet on color, I wanted a contrasting one for critique. This is a work in progress but I liked how its evolving.

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kaimere May. 06 '07

slightly phallic but can help but love the mark :) very cool

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kosta May. 06 '07

Brilliant idea! Looks to me like you are undoing rotations.**Maybe left part of lower %22U%22 should be shorter (to end at 1/4 of the circle)? Or move up the higher %22U%22? Something with the left part is strange (to me...)**Also, I was thinking about the contrast in size between mark %26 type, but I guess it can work this way too.**Very very good though.

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chanpion May. 06 '07

What a kool name to work with! I agree with Art. The mark that says 'undo' is visually more powerul (at the moment) then the mark on the left. Love to see the progress on this one. Great work mak!

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OcularInk May. 06 '07

This is great feedback from some great designers. Also, I keep wondering what the mark would look like if it was flipped vertically. All in all though, I'd say you did a great job.

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bpotstra May. 06 '07

Why is my name coming up as '0'?

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makote May. 06 '07

Hi guys, thanx for the comments, the decision to put the letterforms beside it was to clear up the name thought its easy to decipher, I think it needs some help at least for a while. Im experimenting with cutting down the lower u, and the color schemes I'll upload as soon as I get something that shows improvement. In all thanx for the reviews. What do you think would the mark hold by itself?

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nido May. 07 '07

looks like a girl with a big fat nose... im only kiddin, i like this, good stuff:)

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Jeff Fisher LogoMotives May. 08 '07

Very interesting icon - my mind immediately went to phallic, or sexual, as well. Maybe it's the pink...

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