SerbianFruit Vo2

by hyperborea • Uploaded: Mar. 23 '11 - Gallerized: Mar. '11


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Description: Here is my second proposal for "SerbianFruit". Serbian national country dance "kolo" and illusion of fruit image made of it.
Status: Unused proposal
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wizemark Mar. 23 '11

Ojsa.. :) Although the concept itself is quite clever i think that this really needs a lot more work. Doesn%60t look appealing at all, imo. The figures are looking more like a mock-up or initial draft in a cracking phase, the leaf could use some more details and refinements considering that is so prominent.. dunno.. too much is going on in there.. Have you tried more simplistic approach? ie. using just red dots to portray ppl and a %60kolo%60 with the nicely executed leaf at the top? I think that problem is too much details and too literal approach. Just my 2 dinars.. :)

lumavine Mar. 23 '11

I like the literal people holding hands, very nice feel! I agree that the leaf seems to be unrefined. Great work!

hyperborea Mar. 23 '11

@milou*Thanks mate.**@srdjan*Many thanks for the opinion mate, much appreciated. However, that draft or mockup sense you're feeling is more than intentionally installed into this logo, as well as literal %22kolo%22 approach. This way I wanted to make the tradditional feel to it, to make it look like the old granny that sells souvenirs painted that on a wooden plate if you know what I mean. Thats why the leaf is out of detail as well. You will agree that dots concept you mentioned instead of literal folks in national costumes would ruin this approach.**@lumavine*Thank you, I'm glad you like these little folks!

iguana Mar. 23 '11

odlichna ideja, iako ne znam da li trpi dodatno smanjivanje. ALi svejedno, odlichno

hyperborea Mar. 24 '11

Thanks fellows.*Hvala braco srbijanci.*

javiermichalczik Mar. 25 '11

it makes people peaceful:)

hyperborea Mar. 25 '11

yes, peace to all of you out there!

wizemark Mar. 28 '11

Thanks, Andrej. Ye, it makes sense.. simplified approach i mentioned might be too simple and it would def ruin the feel you%60re after here..

Noetic Brands Mar. 28 '11

This is just great. I wouldnt add anything to it. Nice!


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