"K"

by Mikeymike • Uploaded: Mar. 08 '11

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Description: WIP_ letter "K" for a bakery. Does it work?
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ColinTierney Mar. 08 '11

mike, i think this works. good job.

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ColinTierney Mar. 08 '11

%5E perfectly bread? no?

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sbdesign Mar. 08 '11

It is perfectly read out**Excuse for my English :)*

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ColinTierney Mar. 08 '11

no no, your english was correct, i was just doing a play on words. bakery - bread - read.

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sean heisler Mar. 08 '11

Definitely reads, nice work, Mike. I'm wondering if the lines on the bread might be simplified when considering the mark used very small. Possibly three lines, perhaps slightly larger, more graphic and not so subtly detailed. Just a thought.

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Type08 Mar. 08 '11

One more thought as well, I think that it would work with the solid grain as well (instead of hollow one as it is now). But nice overall feel to it mate!

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Mikeymike Mar. 08 '11

humm...good feed back. thanks Sean and Alen.*I think I'll sit back, have a slice of bread and give that some thought. cheers.

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deiv Mar. 08 '11

hey, Mikey...very interesting and original. As i saw before and see now...i can easily say %22as always!%22 %3B)

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Mikeymike Mar. 08 '11

Deiv, Joe thanks, guys.*Just about to up date with a newer version. Hope your still on board.

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Mikeymike Mar. 08 '11

UPDATED: simpler bread. Also have another version with the grain solid in color.

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mh Mar. 08 '11

this is very cool mike :)

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Mikeymike Mar. 08 '11

Alex, Mathias thanks guys. still deciding between this one and the other.

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vernics Mar. 08 '11

Very interesting Mike!

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sean heisler Mar. 08 '11

Nice, mike! Like the simpler bread. Feel free at any time to tell me to shut up, but I had another suggestion. :) On the wheat, the little %22points%22 that stick out the side of the wheat on the sides, they almost feel like they need to either need to bump out a tad more or completely lose them because they are so small it could be mistaken as an error (if you know what I mean). Lastly (promise) how about extending the center stroke of the wheat at the top up just a bit so it's a little taller than the other two on the left and right? Feel free to ignore, buddy! :)

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sean heisler Mar. 08 '11

%5E Wish I knew how to type.

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Mikeymike Mar. 08 '11

vernics, thanks for comment.*Sean, still working on this. I see your point. I had them all straight early on. may have to go back that way. Sorta like the other concept now though. it seems cleaner. got to back away for a bit, maybe.*thanks for the insight. always helpful.*cheers.

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Mikeymike Mar. 09 '11

Thanks, Thierry. kind words indeed. fan of your work also man.

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