Kill Shot Ammo.

by bullmastiff07 • Uploaded: Oct. 28 '10

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Description: Just working on my logo design. Any comments? This is my "BRAIN DUMP" logo.
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JoePrince Oct. 28 '10

%5EThat's just like your opinion man.

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milou Oct. 28 '10

Try to put the name for one time, not on every bullet %26 over cross-pointer.

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milou Oct. 28 '10

Big Lebowski FTW, Joe.

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lumavine Oct. 28 '10

Is it supposed to seem phallic? I would start in black %26 white and really refine the shapes if you are set on going with a literal representation of bullets.

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fosterbarker Oct. 28 '10

Try a cleaner approach. Way too much going on here.

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JoePrince Oct. 28 '10

Haha Milosz, exactly. Well it seems as me and you watch too many movies. Heh

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Alexander Oct. 28 '10

I don't want to comment on this for fear of pissing off someone whose logo reads %22KILL SHOT AMMO%22. But yeah, I'd try simplifying things a lot.

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gil.corcuera Nov. 02 '10

I like the general direction your going. I'd lose the gradient in the bullets and I think lose some of the kill shot text.

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J_Ben_A Nov. 02 '10

I agree with milou a little repetitive with the name. Maybe try one bullet going into the target.

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MaHOSkey Nov. 02 '10

I would lose the bullets. Maybe move the text around the cross hairs.

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lgmatt86 Nov. 02 '10

I like the concept of using %22cartridges%22 but it looks a little too busy, and...phallic :)

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J_Ben_A Nov. 02 '10

I like getting rid of the bullets, unless you really like them

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emesghali Nov. 02 '10

hmm. generally having the name of the brand in three different places is not a good idea. there's a lot to improve on, but if i was to select one thing just have the type show up once, much bolder, and somewhere visible and obvious.

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vision design and graphics Nov. 03 '10

bullmastiff07, *I agree with most on this posting, this logo has way too much going on. You need to simplify it without getting clich%E9. You need to be careful with this logo because the risk of being clich%E9 is way high. If you pull the bullets off and leave the target this would be clich%E9, if you keep the bullets, they need a ton of work!

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