Reder

by SecondEight • Uploaded: Jan. 25 '15 - Gallerized: Feb. '15

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Description: The client wanted a Reindeer for a wedding agency , elegant , big horns and a crown, the crown and the horns are connected togeather , and im still in progress
Status: Client work
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Tags: Crown • Horns • Reindeer • Wedding
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bartodell Feb. 25 '15

This is nice work on the reindeer illustration, but the typeface seems disconnected to the mark in weight and style.

secondseight Feb. 25 '15

Thank you very much bartodell , and i appreciate your critiques!
And much thanks for gallery spot:)

secondseight Feb. 25 '15

Logo is unused so i changed the font and name to

bartodell Feb. 25 '15

Honestly you need a typeface with more weight to it. The icon is bold and strong, while the text seems as though it was an afterthought in placement and size. Moving to a stronger slab-serif for example and adjusting the size of the icon in relation to the text would help this a lot.

secondseight Feb. 26 '15

Thank you bartodell i appreciate your help very much , I changed again , now i think is better , i didn't spent to much time with typoface because the logo was unused but your critiques helped me :) thanks again