Reder

by SecondEight • Uploaded: Jan. 25 '15 - Gallerized: Feb. '15

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Description: The client wanted a Reindeer for a wedding agency , elegant , big horns and a crown, the crown and the horns are connected togeather , and im still in progress
Status: Client work
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Tags: Crown Horns Reindeer Wedding
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bartodell Feb. 25 '15

This is nice work on the reindeer illustration, but the typeface seems disconnected to the mark in weight and style.

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secondseight Feb. 25 '15

Thank you very much bartodell , and i appreciate your critiques!
And much thanks for gallery spot:)

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secondseight Feb. 25 '15

Logo is unused so i changed the font and name to

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bartodell Feb. 25 '15

Honestly you need a typeface with more weight to it. The icon is bold and strong, while the text seems as though it was an afterthought in placement and size. Moving to a stronger slab-serif for example and adjusting the size of the icon in relation to the text would help this a lot.

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secondseight Feb. 26 '15

Thank you bartodell i appreciate your help very much , I changed again , now i think is better , i didn't spent to much time with typoface because the logo was unused but your critiques helped me :) thanks again

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secondseight May. 27 '15

Thank you very much Lijo

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