Office Space

by JustTomTom • Uploaded: Jul. 23 '11

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Description: I'm new to logo design and this is my first submission. I've seen others submit designs for made up businesses, so I thought I would try it out for fun and practice. In this case, I've designed a logo for a made up office storage and supplies shop. I really want to improve my design skills, so any advice/criticism/nitpicking is more than welcome!
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nathantrafford Sep. 07 '11

Interesting idea here. I'd try making the doors on the left and right the same grey that you're using for the word 'space' so that the thumbtack shape becomes prominent. I'm thinking there has to be a better option for the type, but I can't land on one in my head that I like best. You could set it on the right of the tack, and make it one word with no space inbetween. You could make the type about 75%25 smaller and split the two words between the 'nail' part of the tack (make sure there's room to breathe). There's quite a few things you could do.

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justtomtom Sep. 09 '11

Oooohh I didn't even notice this comment hahaha! Sorry about that. Anyways, I tried placing the type with the nail between the two words before, but it felt a little cluttered (maybe I didn't leave enough breathing room). I'll try everything else you mentioned though. I'm surprised I didn't even think of placing the type to the right of the mark! I'll see what I can whip up later on with a revision. Thanks :).

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