Hi Eddie, was just thinking something like this http://logopond.com/gallery/detail/61384 But a Pin instead, where you would not see the very bottom of pin. The stripe would make the crossbar. Just a thought.
Yeah that looks good but the other was cool too. I thought you would just add another design. I think here you should eliminate the bottom part (red) of outline around pin and just let the natural negative space take shape. Less is More here in a big way. The perspective shows Lane. I would lose everything expect the A Lane shape and pin. But hey that's just what I would do.
Alright I updated this back to the original. An uploaded the other version. Unfortunately, no this was not for a client but maybe one day I could use it. *I was working on other work in illustrator an just got side tracked and came up with this and continued to play around with it.*Thanks for the comments and feedback appreciate it.
Hey Eddie, I gotta say I was a huge fan of this one when you first uploaded it. IMO you've added too many elements and taken away from the simplicity and cleverness of the design.
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I could picture that being an awesome sign for a bowling alley..
ReplyNice play with perspective and negative space. The subtle hidden A is a great touch.
ReplyGreat piece of work. True craftsmanship.
ReplyThanks guys.
ReplyBravo! ditch the lines in the Type.
ReplyJust Amaizing...!
ReplyThanks Mike - Yeah I dropped the lines good call.**Thanks Adrian.
ReplyWelcome, ya know you could also do a version of type only using the negative spaces as Pins like you have here.
ReplyCool, Eddie!
ReplyThanks Sean.**@Mike i'm not sure that i'm seeing it. Would I lose the enclosure or the %22A%22 shape. I'll be messing around with it though.*
Replyreally amazing...
ReplyHi Eddie, was just thinking something like this http://logopond.com/gallery/detail/61384 But a Pin instead, where you would not see the very bottom of pin. The stripe would make the crossbar. Just a thought.
ReplyThanks SBJ**Mike, yeah here it is like that. Looks good.
ReplyYeah that looks good but the other was cool too. I thought you would just add another design. I think here you should eliminate the bottom part (red) of outline around pin and just let the natural negative space take shape. Less is More here in a big way. The perspective shows Lane. I would lose everything expect the A Lane shape and pin. But hey that's just what I would do.
ReplyKeep all you got just in case I'm wrong. But I'm thinking it could be epic and your client will love it.
ReplyDon't add subtract. Sorry I only obsesse of designs I see major potential in.
ReplyYeah, where's the original? Ah, that's a shame.
ReplyAlright I updated this back to the original. An uploaded the other version. Unfortunately, no this was not for a client but maybe one day I could use it. *I was working on other work in illustrator an just got side tracked and came up with this and continued to play around with it.*Thanks for the comments and feedback appreciate it.
Replystill i luv it more than other one...
Replynice work good stuff hotshot
ReplyThanks again SBJ*Thanks Joey*
ReplyThe concept is put together very well, I could really see this being used as a logo for a bowling alley. Great work E Brown.
ReplyHey Eddie, I gotta say I was a huge fan of this one when you first uploaded it. IMO you've added too many elements and taken away from the simplicity and cleverness of the design.
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