Oct. 18 '10
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Logo created for a game/puzzles website. Custom type. I would love to receive some criticism. Thanks everyone!
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wow. sick mark! well done, mate!
crazy mark man :)
Very playful :)
Hey buddy - couple of things.. for me the x doesnt read as an x (it seems closer to an a). The %22P%22 mark is great but it may be too detailed to reduce clearly.. if this only has to live online at this size you might be okay but I think simplifying it and allowing a little more breathing room between the various toys would help. Just my 2c..
This is still only a proposal and if it is chosen by the client i will certainly consider your criticism. I had already thought about it even%3B details and legibility specially the X.**Thanks, buddy. Much appreciated your comment.
Hey buddy,*I'm not sure about the type it looks cool, but my two cents would be to try it in one line and put the tag beneath it. Also the issue is the mentioned x. Then it will be perfect imho. Love the mark %26 colors, thumbs up.*Cheers.
like the colors, agree with milou
Thanks everyone, i'm now working on this proposal%3B was choosed by the client. I'll consider all these comments! :)
Congrats, man! Looks great! Waiting to see the final!
Thanks henric! I'll ask for your opinion, amigo!
wonderful concept and idea. congrats, mate!
Thanks Claudiu, means a lot! :)
Liked a lot, the colors too.**but what about increase the %22P%22 eye?**i think is too small if all this toys around...
Thanks Diego, i'm working on this issues. I'll be less toys around and bigger, wait to see the final version, mate!
the mark is great... some effort gone into that. The type I don't know about.
Thanks Paul, I'm putting the typ in line and testing some new X's, really appreciate your comment man. :)
Thanks, Ali! :) - Type updated
Thanks James! i'm finishing the final version right now, I will update soon, mark and type
Insane mark Breno! Fantastic!
Thank you Thomas, updated with what i guess will be the final version. :)
Nice update :)
You have updated the mark also Breno? Or I'm going nuts already?! Type looks better now for sure, I think you could adjust the size of P to the line of the rest and that would be just even more cool I think. Love those mosaic buddy!
Yes Milosz, take a look on dribbble, the previous one have more icons and a bit of 'color dust'%3B this have less and bigger icons/toys - still working on type.**Thanks Tomme, James and Luiz! I'm glad you like, guys. :)
Aah, sure now I see the differences you've made, turned great Breno, congrats on the gallery spot.
congrats, mate! you deserved that!
well done Breno, well deserved spot.
You really did a great job!!
Great Job Breno!
Fantastic. Well done : )
i think ur type selection might be imperfect or u edited it in wrong way, the 'p' has more visual slop toward letter 'e' bloth are looking same, u have work on 'p'.
beautiful %22P%22 !
Thanks a lot, guys! really appreciated. I mean this is the final version, type and mark. Thank you all! :)
Hot stuff man.
Really well executed. The style of the individual icons are very similar to Unilever. But still looks great.
my eyes are bleeding from sheer awesomeness!
Can't. Handle. The Awesomeness.
Although it's nicely done it's just another drop in the sea of Unilever looking logos. Your other option is choice.
wow.wow.wow, fantastic composition and colors !*How difficult to create such detailed work...
You spent enough time on this one, it shows. Awesome!
Love it, Breno!
Thanks everyone, i'm very proud of this. *Probably i will work on the new Plexus website :D**Jerron, thanks for your imput%3B really means a lot for me.
Awesome again my good man!
Amazing work buddy! Nicely done
Super! Super! Super!
great job great idea
Excelente trabalho. Pena ter visto s%F3 agora e n%E3o ter podido contribuir a tempo, se foi a inten%E7%E3o. Apenas notei que, talvez, a %E1rea ao redor das curvas que passam uma por cima da outra no s%EDmbolo criando a ilus%E3o de profundidade poderia ser um pouco mais ampla, facilitando, assim, a leitura da forma. Apenas um detalhe na obra excepcional. Parab%E9ns!
150 in just a breeze :p congrats mate
Looks very good. Though playful I'm not sure if it tells us much about puzzles or games.
This must have taken ages! Excellent design and love the custom type. Looks like you really went the extra distance with this one.
Although it's nicely done ..
Thanks everyone! :) *youre great, logoponders :D
Wow, this is quite fantastic. It's obvious you put a lot of work into this. It's colorful, playful, full of energy - seems to meet the mark perfectly. Your client should be extremely happy with this.
great execution of an existing idea, not original
Thanks for your imput, Flant.
So playful and sweet!
Thanks Epicantus and 13mu. Tha client is quite happy with the outcome :)
Can anyone help me to find tutorial how to create these kind of logos? I mean warping tiny shapes into the big one? There are tons of logos like this and I guess this is not a great secret to share :)**please...
In my case I did not follow any special technique, friend. In any case, I'll post soon the whole process of developing this logo on my Behance portfolio. Then you can check how I got this result. I advance that i say that has no secret. :)
:)) thank you.. I'll be checking your portfolio :)
Thanks Jazz and Walan! :)
More of the Plexus Puzzles development, check it on my folio http://bit.ly/e8AWYg :)
inpiring work and great process, thanks for sharing!!
Nice post BB.
Thanks guys :)
I think someone was over inspired by your brilliant work :)%0D*http://creattica.com/logos/dietea/51812
Matto, that's a similar style, not a rip. If you begin to think that way, then all 'parts' logos lined up together would look like they were all ripping each other off, which is not true.
P.S.: Unliver's logo is a 'parts' logo. And, well, actually pre-dates this one I believe. Link here: http://www.farmland.org/images/UnileverLogo.JPG
I'm not saying it's a rip, I just thought the author of that logo was strongly inspired by Breno's work :)
Thanks for explaining, Matto. Usually when someone says 'over-inspired' it is a somewhat polite way to say that they believe someone has ripped off someone else's work. That's all.
Yes, I don't think that is inspired by my logo or any other, just a style overused, like Unilever and many other parts logos.
Beautiful shit! LOVE IT. :*
In my language...STRAORDINARIO!!!
You've taken the unilever style to a whole new level. What a showcase!
Thank you so much, Guys! :)
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