Holy Kolache

by BabbeyLynn • Uploaded: Jul. 10 '12

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Description: Holy Kolache is a bakery and deli place that is great for breakfast, with delicious kolaches. I am currently going to school for graphic design and this was my assignment to recreate a logo from a small place. My logo is similar to theirs but i made it a more simple and pop more to make it more recognizable.
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PhantomNerifes Jul. 10 '12

The Lettering of the logo gives a feeling of (Hawaiian?) tropical, i'm not sure if that was the main idea or not, but overall it seems pretty okay. I'm not fond of the phrase "These are good!" because 1. it's not a bold color that shows it. 2. even if it could be seen, i personally think it could do without that under it. the wheat next to the H is a nice touch as well. so in a nutshell, get rid of the phrase "these are good!" or leave it, but i still think the logo could do without it.

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lancegarcia Jul. 10 '12

brooke, i enjoy your colors and concept very much. i like its very organic and mellow, i do i agree the tag line needs to be axed, but other then that, kudos. cheers.

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MauricioG Jul. 10 '12

Awh very well done. I like everything about about this logo but one thing... The font needs to be changed. I agree with them ^^^ but beside the font very well done.

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BabbeyLynn Jul. 10 '12

ha Funny thing is those two things the FONT and TAG LINE i kept of theirs. i didn't pick that font or that tag line, i kept it of theirs and changed everything else. i appreciate all the feedback!

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nessarobbins Jul. 11 '12

I really do like it. I think that it is simple but very attention grabbing. But the tag line does need to go. I actually like the font it think that it is different and not used all that much. Great job.

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bryanlauer11 Jul. 14 '12

Everyone took my responses to this logo so I really cannot say anything about about other than well done.

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vision design and graphics Jul. 17 '12

BabbeyLynn,
I agree with PhantomNerifes about the Hawaiian/tropical look/feel. I don't know, however if this is a good thing or a bad? I like what has been done with the oval around the logo itself; but it does break rule #37 Do not use taglines in the logo. and #40 "Do not use any ȁCswooshȁD or ȁCglobeȁDsymbols." Like lancegarcia I feel the logo is very organic and mellow. It feels like a modern bakery logo. Looks Good!

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