Berrysys Proposal WIP

by AlexWende • Uploaded: Oct. 30 '11

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Description: *updatet* Made some changes regarding the custom typography. I've reduced the thickness of the lines to achieve a better readability and balance between mark and typography. The type is italized now.
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mr.purple Oct. 30 '11

I like the attempt with the custom lettering.*However, my humble opinion is - and here I would like to point out that I'm not a designer/graphic artist by profession -, that making the 'y' the same height as the 's' and using the same lower curl in both letters in the exactly same position makes the 'ysys' part a little bit confusing(not that pleasant to read). I wonder what it would look like if the upper part of the 'y' would be more extended, with the lower curl sticking out slightly from the textline.*Anyway, these are just some 'first sight' ideas :)

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AlexWende Oct. 30 '11

*updatet* I think you're right, it's more readable with a more common aproach for the %22Y's%22 Thanks for the feedback!

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chanpion Oct. 30 '11

I drivvveled on dribbble.

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mr.purple Oct. 31 '11

Like it much better now :)

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AlexWende Oct. 31 '11

Thanks! I've *updatet* it and made some changes regarding the custom typography. I've reduced the thickness of the lines to achieve a better readability and balance between mark and typography. The type is italicized now. Thanks for the feedback Chanpion!

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Type and Signs Oct. 31 '11

very good readability ... very nice upgrade ... like it this way !

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oski Oct. 31 '11

Nice Alex this type has a style!

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AlexWende Nov. 02 '11

*updated* the *colors* / less fruity %26 warm colors - changed it to a more cooler color palette. I think the cyan goes well with the greens. Curious about your opinion, what do you think?

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action Nov. 02 '11

Nothing to say, it is just fantastic!

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chanpion Nov. 02 '11

Yes, spot on brother. Love the new colour.

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