Wine Martini Bar
by tini1 • Uploaded: Feb. 28 '08
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designed for upscale trendy bar.......modern but relaxed.....hip, but down to earth...;)
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Hi tini1,%0D*%0D*Like it! Immediate thoughts are that the tagline %22wine and martini bar%22 is kind of superfluous and I wouldn't worry about figuring out how to make it fit in... it just screams %22bar%22 already. Also, toothpick should be pointier. :)%0D*%0D*But the major issue is that I think you need %22live%22 to have more thickness and roundedness so that it integrates with the olive as part of the same word. Else you risk this being read as %22purple... Live!%22 (which actually is how I saw it at first before I 'got' it)%0D*%0D*Here's a couple rough tweaks to show the gist, and I also think filling in the swirl makes it look more like a pimento/hole:%0D*%0D*%3Ca href%3D%22http://metaeducation.com/logopond/purolivoLP1_2.png%22%3EpurolivoLP1_2.png%3C/a%3E%0D*%0D*Regards,%0D*met%26aelig%3Bducation
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