rosepark

by sbj • Uploaded: Jul. 06 '10 - Gallerized: Nov. '10

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Description: logo for a residential hub..
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tass Jul. 06 '10

Nice idea, i think it can work with the regular r too, don't you?

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sbj Jul. 06 '10

Thanks tass.. yess it will! but with current one the r looking more like a leaf in open air.. wat u say?

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zibbidy Jul. 06 '10

Good combination, like it.

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Rokac Jul. 06 '10

Good points by Tass but IMO this way it's more interesting:)*Also your rose reminds me more of a tulip, but I guess that's just me:)

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OcularInk Jul. 06 '10

Solid concept. I agree with tass about the regular r. Flipping it seems unnecessary. Also, as Rokac pointed out, a little more work on the rose would knock this one outta the %22park%22. Coming along nicely though.

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tass Jul. 06 '10

I don't think the concept (the leaf) will be lost by flipping it, it's true that right now it has more impact maybe, but this way the r can be interpreted as an isolated symbol and so you get osepark. :) Just my opinion.

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sbj Jul. 06 '10

thanks a lot guys.. feel great.. mean lot to me...*@Zibidy- thanks mate*@Rokac- yess this rose is inspired by tulip but this is way to be different , wat u say?**@tass- concept dont loss but not that effective i think.. ok i will up other one as well :)**@ocularink- i want a rose to be diff thats why i make like this.. do u want me to move towards traditional one or just resemblance is fine :)

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OcularInk Jul. 06 '10

I'd try moving more towards a traditional one. It can still be iconic. Right now, this just looks like a red tulip. If you google %22tulip icon%22, you'll see what I mean. In my opinion, a more traditional styled iconic rose will strengthen the concept. Hope this helps. :-)

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sbj Jul. 06 '10

ocularThanks Guys for ur comment %26 floats..*http://logopond.com/gallery/detail/109251*chk this one with regular 'r'..*still working on rose part ocularink :)*

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sbj Jul. 06 '10

im uploading few options of rose icon with this one.. plz let me know wat u think..*

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pixelbatch Jul. 06 '10

the backwards %22r%22 makes you wonder why it's positioned that way, and when you finally realize, you see how great the logo really is. Good job, and much more effective than when the r is not backwards IMO

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Lecart Jul. 07 '10

i see some kerning issues, like r o s epa rk**otherwise a really nice work.

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sbj Jul. 07 '10

updated Lecart.. Thanks for suggestion :)*Thanks Pixelbatch for liking this one.

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sbj Jul. 07 '10

Updated.. thanks Justin %26 nitty :)*@nitish- nice to see u bro.. long time

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JF Jul. 07 '10

Smart, simple, well-executed. Great work.

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tass Jul. 07 '10

I've seen the other uploads too, and i think that you might be right this looks the most interesting. One final suggestion in order to combine the flipped r and a normal r would be to separate the flower into an independent symbol, but it guess that will bring you to a quite different result. So, so far this one is the best imo.

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sbj Jul. 07 '10

Thanks jf %26 tass... *@tass- ya funny situation.. r or fliped r but i m still holding type on this though looking to improve rose icon..separate symbol.. i didnt thought much about that well i giv that a try as well :)

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hanuman shakti Jul. 12 '10

hey I think....I like this one better. The audience will notice the r anyway....cool man!

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sbj Jul. 12 '10

thanks hanuman.. where ur icon gone .. i like that one..*

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Noetic Brands Aug. 11 '10

I think it looks great. I am a bit late to comment but IMHO i dont think it looks like a tulip. They always say if you make an image of a word that already exists in the company name then you make you're calling your audience dumb :). I think the word Rose bursts alot of visual aroma on the overall image. Once a brain reads %22rose%22 it starts scanning for rose images in anything else it sees. And to see the red color and the flowery image will be sufficient to recognize the brand. Just my 2 cents.. I think the name is enough and all it needs is a hint of red and a flowery shape. Good work! Cheers!

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sbj Aug. 12 '10

Thanks Riz.. for a nice explanation %26 liking it :)

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julium Nov. 22 '10

Liked this one a lot. Maybe the simplified rose can looks like a tulip but I understand how hard is to draw a rose in that simplification way.

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julium Nov. 22 '10

Otherwise, I do agree with Noetic Brands about the reading and scanning process of our brains.

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julium Nov. 22 '10

Liked this one a lot. Maybe the simplified rose can looks like a tulip but I understand how hard is to draw a rose in that simplification way. Otherwise, I do agree with Noetic Brands about the reading and scanning process of our brains.

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sbj Nov. 22 '10

Thanks for the gallery spot guys..*thanks juliam for ur thoughts :)*

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webing Nov. 23 '10

Hello, I like it, but at once I read %22josepark%22. *Great typeface choice and color scheme!

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brandsimplicity Nov. 23 '10

Has a great feel, like the way it works.

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sbj Nov. 23 '10

Thanks to you guys.. for ur great support %26 thoughts..*

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efjay Nov. 24 '10

It looks more like tulip..

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sbj Sep. 21 '11

thanks guys .. BTW tulips are no very popular in India.. its a local client.. not even online..

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