Cyclones Logo

by ricecakes • Uploaded: Aug. 27 '08

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Description: Logo concept (and my first attempt at a sports logo) for the Cyclones, a local baseball team. Before you ask, the client did not want the team name included in the logo.
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needforname Aug. 27 '08

maybe try adding some black lines to where the grey shadowing is at the bottom of the body. The white circle behind him looks a little weird. Not sure wabout the lime green color behind it either. I like the character though. pretty cool. Nice job

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itsgareth Aug. 27 '08

Nice linework. However, I first thought it was a ghost...and then a shark...I think you need to make the %22twist%22 of the tornado more apparent.

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GabrielRO Aug. 27 '08

dont like the greenish background... it steals all the attention

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GabrielRO Aug. 27 '08

dont like the greenish background... it steals all the attention, but i like the illustration

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dikkers Aug. 27 '08

%22Nice linework. However, I first thought it was a ghost...and then a shark...I think you need to make the %22twist%22 of the tornado more apparent.%22**Maybe some debris swooshing around him

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ricecakes Aug. 28 '08

Thanks for the feedback.**@ its gareth: The client made similar comments about his body looking like soft-serve ice cream. You may be onto something. I ended up putting some Taz-esque swirls around his lower body, and they liked it.**@ GabrielRO: Yes, but I like green so much... You may be right.

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lucidity Aug. 28 '08

The green is far too bright. If you must keep the green, perhaps a lighter or less pronounces shade.%0D*%0D*I also thought it was a ghost.

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sdijock Aug. 28 '08

I actually thought it was a sperm when I first saw it - no lie. I thought it might be a mascot logo for a pharmaceutical product.

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hindmarshdesign Aug. 28 '08

%22Combantrum worming tablets...fights worms that fight back.%22%0D*%0D*okay sorry. I only just realised that it was a cyclone. I really thought it was a worm. Maybe it was the shape of the face or the colour. Cool idea though! It's well illustrated, I just wasn't sure what it was.%0D*

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ricecakes Aug. 29 '08

Thanks for all the comments. I decided to change it to an updated version, closer to what the client actually went with. This is my personal favorite incarnation of the sperm-ghost-worm.

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hindmarshdesign Aug. 31 '08

The wind bits work better adn the colour is nice :) Well done!

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itsgareth Sep. 01 '08

It looks more like a screw now

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