SoapFactory

by patriciape • Uploaded: Dec. 06 '10

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Description: online shop
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patriciape Dec. 08 '10

little color touches. updated. and thanks for floats!

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lecart Dec. 08 '10

Prolly' it's just me, but the out-of-focus like circles hurts the eye.

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patriciape Dec. 08 '10

hm i don't really know what you mean could you be more specific? what should i change? thanks :)

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nido Dec. 08 '10

%22I don't see the connection between soup, factory, and this mark. Elaborate?%22**...oh shut up.

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milou Dec. 08 '10

%5E What if they're bubbles from soup/factory. Make your mind move a little more %3B-)

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logomotive Dec. 08 '10

%5E That's the first thing that came to my mind. I see Tomato ,split pea,cheddar, etc.

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lecart Dec. 08 '10

%22hm i don't really know what you mean could you be more specific? what should i change? thanks :)%22**I'm not implying you should change anything, I'm just saying that it hurts the eye a bit, maybe due to the glow (stroke) on the circles, and the transparency, I don't know.

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jerron Dec. 08 '10

I see some lobster bisque in there.

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logomotive Dec. 08 '10

Anthony, that's because your being narrow minded.

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patriciape Dec. 08 '10

Oh anthony thanks for kinds words! :%5D so sorry you can't spot the bubbles. **I see and i think is not hard to notice because of its transparent for example. And the colorful side because as we now in bubbles we can spot light fission which is so colorful. * *It was my point to show that sides of bubbles. Thats all for my defence

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lumavine Dec. 08 '10

HAH You guys are going back and forth like a bunch of old ladies having tea over a rousing game of bridge. patriciape, I would cut back on the glow myself if you are looking to improve.

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patriciape Dec. 08 '10

made up company producting wide wariety of soups. I don't think so it helps you. From the name is easy to wonder what can it be. And i think the mark should symbolise not reflect, am i wrong? maby it's crapy logo but all in all have conection with soup and bubbles

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paperboat Dec. 08 '10

what happens if it is printed in black and white?*does is still look like flavored soup? **If it will never be printed in BW, please explain in detail how you will process this in color. I would love to know. **

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patriciape Dec. 08 '10

it's online shop, so it will be used only in web.

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Hayes Image Dec. 08 '10

I also see the 'factory' side of it...the colour dots remind of the rainbow effect created by the mix of oil %26 water on pavement. :)

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JF Dec. 08 '10

I think for this logo to be successful, the glow does have to go, no rhyme intended... Agree with others. Also: %22Soup Factory%22 makes me think this is a tangible product, soup in fact...which is odd, considering it's solely online.

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tabithakristen Dec. 09 '10

I'll say that this says %22Soap%22 more than %22Soup%22 to me but it's still nice.

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contrast8 Dec. 09 '10

I see a soup dishes from the top...

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epicantus Jan. 22 '11

These are bubbles! And it is really soap, I see this from the first look! Don't listen to others, I got even a bit surprised after reading the comments...!

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tabithakristen Jan. 22 '11

Wait, why does it say %22Soap%22 factory now? When I commented, it said %22Soup%22. That's why it confused me so much.

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patriciape Jan. 23 '11

yep it was a little slip of the tounge, *sorry for confusion

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