by palowski • Uploaded: Jul. 10 '14 - Gallerized: Jul. '14


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Description: LASKY - photographer and outdoor enthusiast who loves knifes
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Tags: badge retro EDC adventure

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herbyderby Jul. 11 '14

Very nice.

A few of things I would play with:

1. The three words, the type at the top, I would increase the tracking, as they are smaller. Tracking helps them to be more visible at smaller sizes and distances.

2. Play with the diamonds between the letters in "LASKY" and maybe just bookend the word with them; make it like this: < LASKY > (but the halves of the diamonds are solid, not carets).

3. Maybe play with the arcs above the mountains...maybe rays of light coming from behind?

Anyway, nice piece. Solid and appealing.


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