beach resort

by onesummer • Uploaded: Apr. 26 '10


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Description: proposal for a beach resort
Status: Work in progress
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Tags: acres resort beach

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Tømme Apr. 27 '10

I like the illustrations, they are lovely. But I think your choice of typography is not correct. You should try something more playful, according to the mark.

mfrank Apr. 27 '10

Cool marks. Try reducing the size of the type a bit.

mfrank Apr. 27 '10

%5Eor try what Thomas says.

CWilk May. 10 '10

I think the typography is actually right on the mark. Using something more playful detracts from the lines of the illustrations so I think a more playful font would make it look too busy.


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