beach resort
by onesummer • Uploaded: Apr. 26 '10
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proposal for a beach resort
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I like the illustrations, they are lovely. But I think your choice of typography is not correct. You should try something more playful, according to the mark.
ReplyCool marks. Try reducing the size of the type a bit.
Reply%5Eor try what Thomas says.
ReplyI think the typography is actually right on the mark. Using something more playful detracts from the lines of the illustrations so I think a more playful font would make it look too busy.
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