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I'm generally not a fan of tracked-out lowercase letters. But here, not only is it not necessary but it's also sticking out beyond the main lockup of your logo. If I was you, I'd line up the outer edges of "indoor clothing" with "Dessu". I think it would look stronger.

Have you tried to make a smoother loop under the bird?

Thank you for your opinion.

Great!!!!!

Amazing work as usual! :)