Soon On Mars v_02

by oblak_ID • Uploaded: Jul. 24 '11

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sean heisler Jul. 24 '11

Funky. Lot of fun. But shouldn't Mars be red?

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nathantrafford Jul. 24 '11

this is cool. I agree with sean, I'd like to see all the orange a little more red. I'd also like to see a version where the 'n' of 'on' is turned 90 degrees clockwise. For whatever reason when I see type stacked like this, I automatically read it sideways, like the spine of a book. I may be crazy, but at first glance I definitely read %22Soon OC Mars%22. Just a thought. Great illustration style, though, and this is apparent through all of your work. It makes me happy. No strokes on stuff. Nice type. All smiles.

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oblak_ID Jul. 24 '11

@Sean**I assume it all depends on the point of view ( red, green,...) %3B)*I'll make one version with the red color.**@Nathan**I didn't think of that ( 'n' position ). I'll try :)**Thank you both!**

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sean heisler Jul. 24 '11

Ha! Yeah, I guess it could depend on point of view. I meant orange by the way, not red! Fits your palette. Nathan makes a good point, had I not seen the name of this in text with your post I am not sure if I would have got %22ON%22 right away either, %22OC%22 may have came to mind. Still, fun handling as is though.

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nathantrafford Jul. 24 '11

the only reason i think red is because mars is red

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milou Jul. 25 '11

I think I prefer this version, both are really cool. Good job, mate.

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Sean Heisler Jul. 25 '11

Yeah, maybe make the orange a bit more red, the color would seem to have more meaning to it.

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oblak_ID Jul. 25 '11

Thanks Milosz!**@Sean*@Nathan**Something like this %5E

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sean heisler Jul. 26 '11

Looks good, but I was thinking about the planet Mars the boy is pointing at being red I guess.

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