World AIDS Day (WIP) 2

by muse7 • Uploaded: Nov. 05 '09

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Description: Logo for World AIDS Day candle light vigil Earth candle held in hands and a Red AIDS Ribbon
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logoboom Nov. 05 '09

I'm liking this one better. Could use a simpler graphic on the globe. Larger continent or no detail at all...just blue. And I think the hands could be more stylized and simplified. Just simple gentle curves like the ribbon. And lastly a bit better separation (but not the white outline on the other) between the hand color and the globe. Play with the type. Maybe a more friendly serif?

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muse7 Nov. 05 '09

@Logoboom - I simplified the hands and added a darker blue separation between the globe and the hands. I also found a font that matches the round globe. Thanks for the feedback on this one. **@Lunde - Thanks for the float. I appreciate it.

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Thrasher317 Nov. 06 '09

I think this concept has some legs. I like the balance that you're bringing, but I'm not sure about the colors. The main thing that's bothering me is the red ribbon. With it positioned as is, the red makes me think of blood and it looks like two dismembered arms/slit wrists. I would maybe tackle this as a strictly black and white logo first, then add colors if you need to. Good luck.

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muse7 Nov. 06 '09

Thrasher317 - It's an AIDS ribbon - red is the color - can't change that. That is actually the only thing that I can't change.

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muse7 Nov. 08 '09

Alright, LP - My client likes this direction but if there are any kinks I have to iron them out tonight. Thrasher317's comment about the positioning of the red ribbon making it look like dismembered arms/slit wrists concerns me greatly. Anyone else seeing that? Help appreciated.*

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logomotive Nov. 10 '09

Yes this is better.I did not get any negative connotations either.

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logoboom Nov. 10 '09

Maybe a little drop shadow like you did to pop the hands off of the globe would work to pop the ribbon off of the hands and take care of the %22blood%22 issue?

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muse7 Nov. 10 '09

Thanks logomotive Mike **Thanks logoboom-dabomb**both of you and Lundeja put my mind at ease. I'll play around with the drop shadow on the ribbon.

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muse7 Nov. 10 '09

Thank you Lundeja, HitByReindeer, John, and Logomotive for the floats. Means a lot.

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