japan garden

by mikeyn • Uploaded: May. 29 '10

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Description: garden design and equipments
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michaelspitz May. 29 '10

Defenitley like the idea of the mark %3B) I do think the whole thing would probably be well served losing a line or two... However I do enjoy the look and balance of the rake. For me, the type is also a bit too weak due to the oulines... I might suggest trying for solid type instead %3E I doubt the concept will suffer.

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mikeyn May. 29 '10

Thanks for the suggestions michael, I wasn't sure about the type myself :)

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michaelspitz May. 29 '10

%5ESure thing %3B) Again, I think the type style may work, it's just doesn't seem to work particualrly well at scale with the outlines...

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