Village Beer Merchant 2

by mattduke • Uploaded: Jul. 21 '08

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hindmarshdesign Jul. 22 '08

I'm really not a fan of the font. I think you could break up the text onto at least 2 lines and choose a san serif font (rather than a script) and then you'd be able to make the type bigger and it should blend better with the image. You could also try the type in green and see if that helps the type blend with the image.%0D*

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itsgareth Jul. 22 '08

awesome illustration!

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peterotoole Jul. 22 '08

Yeah i completely agree with hindmarshdesign. The chosen type is simply too much. The illustration is great that it's a shame to distract attention from it by using such a stylised font. i'd be more inclined to stick with a clean, sans serif and by moving it onto 2 lines as hindmarshdesign said. Having said all that i love the concept here. it brought a smile to my face.

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cerise Jul. 22 '08

Nice illustration

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gyui Aug. 11 '08

I agree with all the above, great illustration. I won't comment on the font since that's been mentioned, but my thoughts are about the black marks around the 6 pack box in your illustration. Maybe remove those, because to me it seems like your 6 pack is shaking, or moving. Otherwise a great mark.

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