Sep. 05 '10
Facchinelo is a small family-owned business handed down through 3 generations. They produce finger lickin' good olives and olive oils.
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2nd take on the Facchinelo logotype. I'd love to hear some thoughts.
Very nice. I prefer this one, mainly for legibility reasons. I feel this baby needs a little more randomness in the baseline or a swash into the descender line somewhere, maybe on the %22n%22 or the %22l%22.
Agree with Julian. Overall very appealing.
To be honest I like this the way it is. I'm loving your typography works.
I like it, still it seems to me the text isn't on a perfect line, it's somehow bended upwards. Do you know what I mean? I think the %22i%22 is the problem, seems to be a bit smaller.
%5E Agreed, the i and n in down part seems little odd regarding to the rest.
I agree with everyone here. I'm sure you will take a look and solve this. Great logo and showcase, Mads.
congrats on the gallery spot. well deserved.*and great showcase man! just keep up the good work.
good one, Mabu!
need some work on lines. but it%3Bs lovely either way
great work, Mabu! andreiu may have a point here, but it looks great anyway:p
terrific type work. great stuff here and in your showcase.
Thanks a bunch for the kind words and feedback everyone. I've revised the issues on the /i/ and /n/.
Lovely type work!
Great type Mads!
Cheers Michael and epicantus.
staring at it for almost two glass of coke and i cant find the downside. Simply beautiful, mabu..
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