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Facchinelo

by mabu • Uploaded: Sep. 05 '10 - Gallerized: Sep. '10

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Description: Facchinelo is a small family-owned business handed down through 3 generations. They produce finger lickin' good olives and olive oils.
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mabu

2nd take on the Facchinelo logotype. I'd love to hear some thoughts.

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Art Machine

Very nice. I prefer this one, mainly for legibility reasons. I feel this baby needs a little more randomness in the baseline or a swash into the descender line somewhere, maybe on the "n" or the "l".

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vernics

Agree with Julian. Overall very appealing.

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milou

To be honest I like this the way it is. I'm loving your typography works.

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andreiu

I like it, still it seems to me the text isn't on a perfect line, it's somehow bended upwards. Do you know what I mean? I think the "i" is the problem, seems to be a bit smaller.

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milou

^ Agreed, the i and n in down part seems little odd regarding to the rest.

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davishama

I agree with everyone here. I'm sure you will take a look and solve this. Great logo and showcase, Mads.

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hyperborea

congrats on the gallery spot. well deserved.
and great showcase man! just keep up the good work.

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bitencourt

good one, Mabu!

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crislabno

need some work on lines. but it;s lovely either way

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myway999

great work, Mabu! andreiu may have a point here, but it looks great anyway:p

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Mikeymike

terrific type work. great stuff here and in your showcase.

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mabu

Thanks a bunch for the kind words and feedback everyone. I've revised the issues on the /i/ and /n/.

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epicantus

Lovely type work!

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michaelspitz

Great type Mads!

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mabu

Cheers Michael and epicantus.

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jippy rinaldi

staring at it for almost two glass of coke and i cant find the downside. Simply beautiful, mabu..

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