by mabu • Uploaded: Sep. 05 '10 - Gallerized: Sep. '10


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Description: Facchinelo is a small family-owned business handed down through 3 generations. They produce finger lickin' good olives and olive oils.
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Tags: mads burcharth mabu texture bespoke

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mabu Sep. 05 '10

2nd take on the Facchinelo logotype. I'd love to hear some thoughts.

Art Machine Sep. 05 '10

Very nice. I prefer this one, mainly for legibility reasons. I feel this baby needs a little more randomness in the baseline or a swash into the descender line somewhere, maybe on the %22n%22 or the %22l%22.

vernics Sep. 05 '10

Agree with Julian. Overall very appealing.

milou Sep. 05 '10

To be honest I like this the way it is. I'm loving your typography works.

andreiu Sep. 05 '10

I like it, still it seems to me the text isn't on a perfect line, it's somehow bended upwards. Do you know what I mean? I think the %22i%22 is the problem, seems to be a bit smaller.

milou Sep. 05 '10

%5E Agreed, the i and n in down part seems little odd regarding to the rest.

davishama Sep. 05 '10

I agree with everyone here. I'm sure you will take a look and solve this. Great logo and showcase, Mads.

hyperborea Sep. 05 '10

congrats on the gallery spot. well deserved.*and great showcase man! just keep up the good work.

crislabno Sep. 05 '10

need some work on lines. but it%3Bs lovely either way

myway999 Sep. 05 '10

great work, Mabu! andreiu may have a point here, but it looks great anyway:p

Mikeymike Sep. 06 '10

terrific type work. great stuff here and in your showcase.

mabu Sep. 06 '10

Thanks a bunch for the kind words and feedback everyone. I've revised the issues on the /i/ and /n/.

mabu Sep. 10 '10

Cheers Michael and epicantus.

jippy rinaldi Sep. 11 '10

staring at it for almost two glass of coke and i cant find the downside. Simply beautiful, mabu..


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