Parkview Pre-cast Concept 2

by lumo • Uploaded: Sep. 30 '10

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JoePrince Sep. 30 '10

Not sure I care for the skewed type, but the mark is kind of neat. I see a P and V, if that was intentional...

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lumo Sep. 30 '10

Yep joe it was - thanks. I'll see about the type.

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lecart Sep. 30 '10

well, it's much better now, imo. the tagline fits better too.

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lumo Sep. 30 '10

I was wondering about the tagline. It's too wide for taking it all the way across. **Overall, I'm liking it better now too as has more of a concrete or solid feel to it. Feel it fits the industry better as it stands now.

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JoePrince Sep. 30 '10

What if you made the tagline a little bigger and nuzzled the mark to the bottom right of the type...does that make sense? Not sure if that would look good or not.

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lumo Sep. 30 '10

updated mark. thanks joe.

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