by lancegarcia • Uploaded: Jul. 25 '12
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this is my logo for atlantis vision studios, i kept it simple with a spash of red.
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I really like the keys. They look off centered though, also "Vision Studios" should be a smaller font size than Atlantis... other than that good job.
ReplyI don't think this is "simple" at all really. The fullstop/period after Antique Restoration is unnecessary (unless the client specifically requests it). I'm also not getting the connection between the keys and antique restoration. :)
Reply@tabitha, I agree with her on what she said. This is not simple, to me it is over doing. Plus the red line makes you want to stop looking at the rest of the logo.
ReplyTabitha and fellow Ponders, don't waste your time on these guys. Its obvious they are just using this site as a portal to upload their um...designs for their school projects. Its purely for their 'inner circle' to discuss and critique. They are NOT going to listen to anything coming from the keyboard of actual designers that are designing for a living.
ReplyUnfortunately for the rest of us they've done nothing wrong. We just have to endure the occasional uploads of 'its-so-painful-I-want-to-scratch-my-eyeballs-out' designs.
Move aside and let them through. Hopefully they'll all crash and burn.
yes !!
ReplyI kinda agree with chanpion on their comment, we're just students using this as a site for our stuff. personally i'd prefer if we kept our work to the classroom, but for some reason we were told to use this site. i'm not thrilled about it either, but it's just a brief thing. besides, afterwards i'll delete this account and be on my way.
ReplyI was asked to give constructive feedback, that's all I was doing. :)
ReplyYou were probably asked to use this site because there are actual professionals like Tabitha on it willing to help students like you. In time with maturity you will understand.
Replyi thank you professional designers on all your feedback! its good to also get your feedback and not just ones to the classroom. but yes i do agree on we are students and still don't know everything about designing yet so its not going to be as great. but i love hearing the feedback! i say thank you!
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