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Sparrow

by kinetic • Uploaded: Mar. 09 '08 - Gallerized: Mar. '08

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Description: Sparrow not only provides financial and emotional support for critically ill children and their families, but also empowers young people to help a child through charitable service experiences.

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kinetic

Some suggested that I use one sparrow to make it more elegant. What do you think?

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ducly

Someone made the suggestion that one bird is good enough. I agree.

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kinetic

Thanks for the feedback guys.

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LOGOMOTIVE

It caught my eye but I feel the overlays and geometric shapes don't quite work with the solidness of the rest,The top half looks great but the rest leaves the bird incomplete, half abstract,half solid?

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kinetic

Thanks Logomotive. I purposely transitioned to an abstract to add movement, interest and uniqueness. It's not unheard of in branding. The New England Patriots logo does this same thing.

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nido

personally i like the blend... have you tried placing the bird at the end of the word sparrow?.. just to see how it would look?

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d.signs.by.jake

@nido: i'm thinking of the same thing.

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SpiffyJ

I agree with dsigns and nido, placement of the bird could be better and the end or beginning.

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Thomas

Excellent logo. Tough, I relay 3 previous comments about layout. Would really like to see the bird on the right (or mirrored on the left). About type, what about creating some swashes/ligatures with ascenders/descenders (mainly R's oblique, W and S)? Just a humble suggestion...

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jordoman

Truly a beautiful thing. Great work.

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hamidos

amazing art this sparrow is vector i like it
good work

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onesummer

@kinetic, I like the logo, but what is your deal? You're constantly anchoring designs with no supporting comments or reasoning.

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angelmunkie

Yeah, I would also like to know the answer to onesummers question!

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fructosevtl

beautiful. i always find myself looking at this logo again and again. nicely executed. :D

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fructosevtl

i have questions for you. do you know where i can get free tutorial for illustrator online? how do you make the shape so smooth? i tried to make my pen tool design smoother lines but i don't know the function of illustrator too well.

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McGuire Design

yes the one sparrow is a better solution, this is nicely illustrated.

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hindmarshdesign

but sparrows are brown...

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hipcheck

to me, the sparrow looks better a bit to the right (2/3 of the way).

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Tømme

nicely constructed sparrow

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