Sparrow

by kinetic • Uploaded: Mar. 09 '08 - Gallerized: Mar. '08

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Description: Sparrow not only provides financial and emotional support for critically ill children and their families, but also empowers young people to help a child through charitable service experiences.

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kinetic Mar. 09 '08

Some suggested that I use one sparrow to make it more elegant. What do you think?

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ducly Mar. 09 '08

Someone made the suggestion that one bird is good enough. I agree.

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kinetic Mar. 09 '08

Thanks for the feedback guys.

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LOGOMOTIVE Mar. 09 '08

It caught my eye but I feel the overlays and geometric shapes don't quite work with the solidness of the rest,The top half looks great but the rest leaves the bird incomplete, half abstract,half solid?

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kinetic Mar. 09 '08

Thanks Logomotive. I purposely transitioned to an abstract to add movement, interest and uniqueness. It's not unheard of in branding. The New England Patriots logo does this same thing.

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nido Mar. 09 '08

personally i like the blend... have you tried placing the bird at the end of the word sparrow?.. just to see how it would look?

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d.signs.by.jake Mar. 09 '08

@nido: i'm thinking of the same thing.

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SpiffyJ Mar. 10 '08

I agree with dsigns and nido, placement of the bird could be better and the end or beginning.

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Thomas Mar. 11 '08

Excellent logo. Tough, I relay 3 previous comments about layout. Would really like to see the bird on the right (or mirrored on the left). About type, what about creating some swashes/ligatures with ascenders/descenders (mainly R's oblique, W and S)? Just a humble suggestion...

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jordoman Mar. 11 '08

Truly a beautiful thing. Great work.

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hamidos Mar. 11 '08

amazing art this sparrow is vector i like it *good work

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onesummer Mar. 19 '08

@kinetic, I like the logo, but what is your deal? You're constantly anchoring designs with no supporting comments or reasoning.

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angelmunkie Mar. 21 '08

Yeah, I would also like to know the answer to onesummers question!

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fructosevtl Mar. 27 '08

beautiful. i always find myself looking at this logo again and again. nicely executed. :D

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fructosevtl Mar. 27 '08

i have questions for you. do you know where i can get free tutorial for illustrator online? how do you make the shape so smooth? i tried to make my pen tool design smoother lines but i don't know the function of illustrator too well.

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McGuire Design May. 27 '08

yes the one sparrow is a better solution, this is nicely illustrated.

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hindmarshdesign Aug. 27 '08

but sparrows are brown...

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hipcheck Nov. 17 '08

to me, the sparrow looks better a bit to the right (2/3 of the way).

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Tømme Apr. 26 '09

nicely constructed sparrow

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