Safari Outfitters - round 2

by kellyoneill • Uploaded: May. 06 '08

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Description: This is the 2nd comp for this company. I welcome your thoughts!
As seen on: www.theartistoflife.com
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Tags: giraffe outfitters sun yellow
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itsgareth May. 06 '08

Much better. However, I feel the slight brush marks you've used on the shapes are uncessary and will get lost at smaller dimensions. Cheers

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sandhya May. 06 '08

hey kelly, if you are planning to keep the strokes, you can make just the edge alone thicker and get rid of the yellowish border. Not really sure how the strokes would translate when made thicker inside as well. Anyway, its a lot better now:)

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kellyoneill May. 06 '08

Thanks both of you! I will try a few things... I did not have strokes on the shapes at first and it just didn't flow well, but I see your point about losing them at smaller dimensions.

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OcularInk May. 06 '08

This is your best yet, Kelly. Glad to see you are enjoying Logopond and are so eager to learn. Nice job.

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gthobbs May. 06 '08

Yes, quite nice compostion and scale. Typography is a little cheese for me but not terrible. I might be responding more to the sans serif rather than the script. Keep up the good work.

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kellyoneill May. 06 '08

Thanks guys! Encouraging for sure...

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rfrusso May. 07 '08

I like the feel of this...

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uryoque May. 15 '08

very peaceful. the sunset colors you used are just the right thing.. *

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saawan Jun. 11 '08

I like the colors very much. The type can be modified to make this a great logo. Nice work!

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cresk Jun. 11 '08

Nice logo with nice colours.*I think the word Safari really swings, but typographically spoken the word 'outfitters' underneath really need some more work, because your design is as strong as its weakest part.

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kellyoneill Jun. 12 '08

Saawan and cresk - thanks! What kind of font would you suggest for %22outfitters?%22 I don't want it to compete with %22safari%22 so I went with a safe san-serif. I appreciate your comments.

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JF Aug. 28 '09

Wow, distinctive style. Nice graphics, has an almost 'tactile' feel to it. Beautiful work.

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Chad Sanderson Oct. 07 '09

Great job! This is quite easily the best logo in your showcase.

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