33 French Modern Cleaners

by jshsu • Uploaded: Jun. 03 '07 - Gallerized: Oct. '07

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Description: Logo design that is still in-progress for a dry cleaning and alteration company. Let me know what you think so far. The colors are based on the website that is in-progress also. Comments welcome, Thanks!
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jshsu Jun. 03 '07

I think i put too much emphasis on the heart.

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Jeff Fisher LogoMotives Jun. 04 '07

I do like the revised heart image better - but now the %22point%22 within the heart/3 seems a bit too sharp in contrast to the larger 3.

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brandsimplicity Jun. 04 '07

I really like where you are trying to take this. In order to make this a cleaner typographical piece I would be inclined to have the lower edges of the heart follow natural the curve of the three, making the overall design more rounded.

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actiondesigner Jun. 04 '07

have you tried to mirror the 3? With the right type you will get a heartshape. You will get symetry and hopefully a nice ornament out of this also. Maybe worth playing around with?????? On the other hand ...do you need the heart?

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jshsu Jun. 04 '07

thanks for the comments, I will rethink the heart and definitely revise the shape of the smaller three. Thanks all for the comments.

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jshsu Jun. 04 '07

I changed it based on some concepts. Decided to keep the heart. Hopefully more subtle now and now the smaller '3' is more similar to the larger, as the heart should be similar in style now.

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Jeff Fisher LogoMotives Jun. 04 '07

I think your new revision is working much better.

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brandsimplicity Jun. 04 '07

Your almost there.The lower curve is a tad off.

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neolux Nov. 17 '07

I love this concept!

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