CWJPP

by javaap • Uploaded: Feb. 24 '11

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Description: Logo for the Carlton Woods Junior Performance Program, a comprehensive golf instruction program for junior golfers at Carlton Woods.
Status: Client work
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lecart Feb. 24 '11

looks great man, wondering if the red isn't too aggressive for the rest of the composition. but anyway, i really like this.

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javaap Feb. 24 '11

Hey thanks Lecart,i appreciate it, yeah thought the same thing but those are their corporate colors so i wasn't able to touch them.

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sdijock Feb. 24 '11

I personally would have made the banner red as well. The front of the banner blends into the background too much right now and I think it would help balance out the crest at the bottom.

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lecart Feb. 24 '11

Hmm, just curios, have you updated this and added the bacgkround? I don't think it was initially there, and i think it distracts.

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javaap Feb. 24 '11

Thanks for the comments guys,**@sdijock it actually was one of my first draft when playing with color, i thought it was a bit to %22colorful%22 and that was an aspect that the client didn't want on the logo.**@Lecart, it actually was, i haven't got a chance to calibrate my monitor yet (i just got it) so its very subtle in my display but ill remove it if its too distracting, thanks :)

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nathantrafford Feb. 24 '11

nice lookin mark! If only you could make that green a touch darker! Maybe you could put a dark green circle behind it? Orrr just tell them %22screw your corporate colors!%22*I checked their site and they have a nice dark green that would be perfect, and in a lot of places the red looks a bit more burgundy. Not saying those colors would work, moreso that if they get to fudge a little with colors on the website, you should be allowed to as well!

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javaap Feb. 24 '11

hehehe,I know right, he was actually a really cool client to work with, its already in use so no more updates but thanks for the comment man i really appreciate it.

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cresk Mar. 03 '11

Very nice exclosure. Agree with the initial comment from lecard here, except that I personally would make the inner border the same red as well.

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javaap Apr. 30 '11

Thanks Gert glad you like it :)

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