by james • Uploaded: Jun. 06 '08 - Gallerized: Jun. '08
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v4. I've used the bold version of the typeface to give it more strength, and increased the size.
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Really nice work! This is really nit-picky, but I think %22trojan%22 could be just a little bit big/wider. I'm picturing the word %22trojan%22 as the shoulders to the figure that might wear the helmet and I think the shoulders would naturally be just a little wider. Aside from that, this is really amazing
ReplyGreat idea. It actually took me a sec to figure out that it was a helmet. I thought at first it was a T underneath a glass cover (like they do with cakes in diners). Nice work.
ReplyGood comments. I think going bold has made a difference, the 1st few versions lacked the weight it needed, i take your point about making the text a bit bigger, i like how you described it as being his shoulders.**fliph.....i stared...and i stared.......and now i get it what you mean :)***cheers
Replygenius! I do agree with the first guy, it would be cool to have the text a little wider to represent his shoulders but thats picky like he said. This is great man
ReplyI still can't help but see a reservoir tip that failed, hence the burst out the top. I know. I know. But it says TROJAN for Pete's sake!
ReplyHmmm...that's funny.
ReplyMaybe its a Trojan cake? Like one of those tubes of chips that actually have snakes in it? Like, when you take off the glass lid, it'll attack you.%0D*%0D*I dunno, I saw it after it was mentioned, but definitely saw the helmet first. Good job.
Replyabsolutely amazing. one of my favorites on the site so far. **its really cewl how the opening makes a t. **the only thing i would change in the colors, i would go with more earthy, rugged ones. **like maybe off-white text and a more copper looking helmit, the burgandy is classic, no need to touch that. **beautiful, absolutely beautiful.
ReplyI love it, it's a great work. I think the feathers should be a bit shorter
ReplyI agree, shorter feathers with a bit more contrast w/ the background. Great work though, I like it. Nice depth...
ReplyI like this....so secure and safe
Replywould be great if the background is black...personally
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