Primo

by hyperborea • Uploaded: Sep. 07 '10 - Gallerized: Sep. '10

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Description: Logo done for the pizza house. Rejected from the client. Is it readable/legible enough? Cause I like it...
Status: Unused proposal
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m1sternoname Sep. 07 '10

I can understand the client thinks it's not legible enough, apart from that I think it looks nice. I wonder if you need the shadow and gradient however.

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Gotty Sep. 07 '10

%22P%22 is quite unreadable the rest looks fine.

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hyperborea Sep. 07 '10

Thanks for the comments guys. Yes I thought that P is a litle bit of an issue. But I really intended to make it original and unique. And speaking of shadow and gradient, yes I agree they don't need to be there, just a way of presentation...should I get rid of these.

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logomotive Sep. 07 '10

I like it, but feel you could detach the P connecting to r and that would work.

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vernics Sep. 07 '10

Really cool typography mate :)

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hyperborea Sep. 07 '10

Thanks again for comments and floats.*All suggestions accepted and here's the logo update.*logomotive I guess you were right.

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hyperborea Sep. 07 '10

thanks tomme, and thanks for the gallery spot david!

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javaap Sep. 07 '10

Really nice mate!

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vernics Sep. 07 '10

Well deserved gallery spot :)

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hyperborea Sep. 08 '10

when the P was connected to the R in initial design, I was able to see it as %22Crimo%22 sometimes. after logomotives suggestion to detach them I think that's solved problem. But never saw %22Trimo%22...thanks for your input Alen, hope that's just you...

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joelalexander Sep. 08 '10

really like this, nice one!

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sbj Sep. 08 '10

yess its Trimo in thumb but working..:)

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Milama Sep. 08 '10

I think it%60s awesome **%3Ca href%3D%22http://cvresumewritingservices.org/%22%3Eresume service%3C/a%3E*

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mattkump Sep. 10 '10

I read Primo immediately... not so much because I saw the 'P', but more because I read 'rimo' and my eyes filled in the gap based on the general shape.**I think it's fine, and actually lovely.

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hyperborea Sep. 10 '10

Thanks to you Mike!

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jippy rinaldi Sep. 11 '10

Works for me. Beautiful!!

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hyperborea Sep. 11 '10

Thanks jippy, your work is great!

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rensdekker Oct. 01 '10

No problem reading it. Very, very nice!

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thuongthuong Oct. 10 '10

i like it, it very cool!

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helloxcthulhu Nov. 29 '10

I was able to read it without a problem. Nice work. :)

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logoboom Nov. 29 '10

ugh...this is gorgeous. the client missed out on a timeless trademark.

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hyperborea Nov. 30 '10

Thanks Glen, glad you like it.

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JF Nov. 30 '10

This is one gorgeous logo. Whatever did the client end up choosing?

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pjmaster Dec. 27 '10

Ovo ti je super Andrej. Ima taj neki flow u sebi. Cheers :)

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hyperborea Dec. 27 '10

Ha! Nisam znao da smo zemljaci covece! Thanks!

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pjmaster Dec. 27 '10

Skoknes do profila i vidis. Simple as that.

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nido Dec. 27 '10

yeah... big shame it went unused... brilliant stuff.

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pacmanb Feb. 17 '11

Great one indeed! Smooth and flowing :)

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lexfnc Mar. 09 '11

%22Rejected from the client. Is it readable/legible enough?%22**It is an awesome logo.*At first sight is a little hard to read, but only for a few seconds, and i dont think this should be a major problem.

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stal Nov. 10 '11

Very nice logotyp :)

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nonickno Jan. 27 '12

Has read trimo, but as a whole looks very much even it is cool

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