Write on Target

by hardlysquare • Uploaded: Jul. 01 '08

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Description: This is a rough I am creating for Write on Target. I would like your feedback. Write on Target organizes workshops for middle school teachers so they can enrich their curriculum for language arts.
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OcularInk Jul. 01 '08

It's a clever idea, but a logo with the word 'target' in the wordmark and a red target as the mark is to close to TARGET's brand in my opinion. Just my two cents. %3B-)

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hardlysquare Jul. 01 '08

I appreciate all cents, even if it is just 2 cents. Thanks! The company's name is Write on Target, so I can't really change that. But I see your point, it is right on target. I'm not sure if I should abandon the target symbol all together just because of the store Target? It is the most recognizable symbol for the word target. Anyone have any thoughts?

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cerise Jul. 01 '08

It is too close to Target's (the store) brand, looks good though

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OcularInk Jul. 02 '08

I hear ya about the company name. Does the target have to be red?

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werthless Jul. 03 '08

or even give the target a few more rings and change the color of each ring. Maybe even make each ring out from the center a lighter shade of the previous ring. Make cents?

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hardlysquare Jul. 03 '08

Thanks Werthless. This suggestion is useful... not worthless. I will try those tips out. Thanks again.

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johannesfreund Jul. 06 '08

Maybe you should pick another typeface that does better express the %22writing%22.*A serif, or even a script.

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