I hadn't noticed the sexy.....i feel that its quite pure in showing the vulnerability in sexual violence. We can't see the pain or the bruises, but we can see that she's really struggling. %0D*%0D*Except for her head being a bit too heavy....
I agree with the type placement, aside from it placed by her butt, would it better for her to be facing the type rather than turned away from the type?
Naked woman says sensual to some%3B vulnerable to others. It says vulnerable to me. And the figure is also showing shame so facing away from the text reinforces that. The figure does need some tweaking and the text moved up, but otherwise this is a really, really wonderful concept.
The drawing is showing me a woman who has been raped. If the drawing is supposed to show empowerment, that is completely the wrong way to go about it. I really don't see sex at all. It is a naked woman closed in on herself due to trauma.**This does pinpoint a problem, however. Most sexual violence is by men to women. If men are seeing sex and submission, the concept is obviously not working toward the demographic it needs to.
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Nicely executed mark.
Replythanks Fogra:)
ReplyIt's incredibly beautiful but it looks a bit top heavy. I feel like she's about to fall on her face. Amazing job on the leg.
Replynice work
ReplyI think that words have a bit strange position here...
ReplyI agree with Type08. Move the text up to the small of her back instead of in line with her butt. Nice graphic.
ReplyHave you considered making a mark that has less sex appeal to promote ending sexual violence?
ReplyAlthough this is a fantastic graphic, I'm with creativeheart on this. This is just too sexy in my opinion.
ReplyI hadn't noticed the sexy.....i feel that its quite pure in showing the vulnerability in sexual violence. We can't see the pain or the bruises, but we can see that she's really struggling. %0D*%0D*Except for her head being a bit too heavy....
ReplyI think it's the size of her %26*%5E* you could drop that down a tad maybe
ReplyI agree with the type placement, aside from it placed by her butt, would it better for her to be facing the type rather than turned away from the type?
ReplyI agree with creativeheart. This is a tad sensual. And the top heavy issue could be fixed with a thinner neck and smaller head.
ReplyNaked woman says sensual to some%3B vulnerable to others. It says vulnerable to me. And the figure is also showing shame so facing away from the text reinforces that. The figure does need some tweaking and the text moved up, but otherwise this is a really, really wonderful concept.
ReplyIt shouldn't say shame either. This is an advocacy logo so it should lend an air of empowerment....not shame (or sex). Feels far too submissive.
ReplyThe drawing is showing me a woman who has been raped. If the drawing is supposed to show empowerment, that is completely the wrong way to go about it. I really don't see sex at all. It is a naked woman closed in on herself due to trauma.**This does pinpoint a problem, however. Most sexual violence is by men to women. If men are seeing sex and submission, the concept is obviously not working toward the demographic it needs to.
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