I agree, the concept is brilliant. And the execution is really awesome. I see that you're not actively seeking critiques, but you say that it still needs some tweaking, so, if I may, I have a couple of minor suggestions that might help:**First, I think the door is overkill. You've done an excellent job of establishing a house shape from the hand, and the key is a brilliant way of suggesting the concept of a real estate agency turning over the keys to the proud new homeowner. There is enough symbolism here, and the door seems to be a gratuitous add-on.**Secondly, I would not connect the forefinger and thumb. Instead, I would give them the same semi-rounded fingertips you gave the other fingers, and have them touching. This would make them more finger-like, and would also make it more logical that the key is being held between those two fingers in a manner that suggests that the keys are about to be dropped into the hands of the new homeowner.**Hopefully this all makes sense.
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float and fav ... ingenious concept ... great work
ReplyThanks TaS. Still needs some tweaking though.
Replygreat idea!!
ReplyBrilliant!
Replyyeah, great concept.
ReplyI agree, the concept is brilliant. And the execution is really awesome. I see that you're not actively seeking critiques, but you say that it still needs some tweaking, so, if I may, I have a couple of minor suggestions that might help:**First, I think the door is overkill. You've done an excellent job of establishing a house shape from the hand, and the key is a brilliant way of suggesting the concept of a real estate agency turning over the keys to the proud new homeowner. There is enough symbolism here, and the door seems to be a gratuitous add-on.**Secondly, I would not connect the forefinger and thumb. Instead, I would give them the same semi-rounded fingertips you gave the other fingers, and have them touching. This would make them more finger-like, and would also make it more logical that the key is being held between those two fingers in a manner that suggests that the keys are about to be dropped into the hands of the new homeowner.**Hopefully this all makes sense.
Reply%5Eexcellent suggestion. except i like the door.
ReplyThis logo is amazing, so strong!
ReplyI like it a lot! Good luck with it.
ReplyThanks guys. Thanks for a suggestion atomicavibe. I submit it to the client already, If it gets approved I'll try to work on it more. Thanks again.
ReplyGreat one!*I love the negative space house, and I agree with @atomicvibe.
ReplyHere you go. Enjoy. :)
ReplyHaven't seen a great real estate logo in a while. This one is amazing.
Replythank you kappy
ReplyNice symbol %26 great identity behind it:)*Love your work man%3B)
ReplyVery interesting idea!
ReplyThanks ivailo. thanks artgeko.
ReplyThats really good, Milash.
ReplyReally great mark!
ReplyWhat a lovely %26 clever mark/concept. So what did the client say milash?
Replynot quite sure. i did it for the agency. they paid and disappeared.
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