Gladius

by djaynoel • Uploaded: Mar. 04 '08

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Description: Logo for Wine label
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kriecheque Mar. 04 '08

It'd be cool if you could work out a more gradual transition from the %22G%22 to the stem, but other then that i think it's a solid mark

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djaynoel Mar. 05 '08

I'll try that, thanks!

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hellouriah Mar. 05 '08

you could refine the negative space more to make it more like a helmet, maybe drop the end on the fern down a bit. Otherwise, its a lovely mark you could turn it into a seal.

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djaynoel Mar. 05 '08

Thank you for the comment hellouriah!

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OcularInk Mar. 06 '08

Great job merging the two elements. This works nicely.

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djaynoel Mar. 06 '08

Thank you Ocularlnk!

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joshgomez Mar. 08 '08

Google meets USC :) I totally agree with making the transition smoother. The bottom of the G looks weak and thin, like the leaves are going to bend down a crush it.

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