Captains of Industry

by djaynoel • Uploaded: Mar. 04 '08 - Gallerized: Mar. '08


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Description: Logo for Ad Agency in Boston, MA
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gthobbs Mar. 04 '08

This is cool. It's a tad bottom heavy and I wish the %22industry%22 was a little distressed maybe. Should the wings/star be a little larger to offset the bottom weight? Plus not sure if the white star should cut the T. I like the feel of this.

djaynoel Mar. 05 '08

Thanks for the comments. Your suggestions are great! The logo was actually inspired by badges from the industrial revolution. It is much lighter on top because it is supposed to take flight giving it an airy feel on the top while contrasting the heavy bottom, as if the wings have broken free. I totally agree with your comment about the industry part, the only reason I left it clean is because I was afraid of how legible it would be at small sizes. Maybe I made the wrong judgement on that one.

spiffyj Mar. 06 '08

gthobbs took the words out of my mouth. Definitely a nice style though.

rfrusso Mar. 11 '08

Nice change to what's been showing up in the gallery. I think you could have distressed 'industry' just a tad. I mean, if you go much smaller than this, the 'of' will become hard to read, too. So why not? :)

krissosa Mar. 11 '08

i really like this one. - something about it just gives off a powerful, resilient feel.*I don't mind the %22Industry%22 not being distressed, I think for legibility sake it works.**Kudos.

djaynoel Mar. 12 '08

Thank you very much for the comments guys!


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