Freemans Flowers

by bartodell • Uploaded: Nov. 30 '07 - Gallerized: Nov. '07

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Description: (Updated with some minor tweaks.) Concept for a friends flower business in my hometown.
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amyblandford Nov. 30 '07

I like this one a lot- my only recommendation would be to enlarge the middle parts a bit, so they fill up more of the oval %26 there isn't quite as much red around it.

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admarcbart Nov. 30 '07

Thanks Amy but there are reasons for the spacing. I like for my logos to breathe.

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logomotive Nov. 30 '07

I knew this was one of yours, looks like you found a new style (nitch) and have increased your type arsenal. I like the timeless look of your latest designs. Nice and refreshing. Keep up your excellent work.

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admarcbart Nov. 30 '07

Mike... Honestly this is scary. I feel like I am being type cast because a lot of people are requesting this look from me. And yes type arsenal has grown quite a bit. :)

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ryantoyota Nov. 30 '07

About the type... I love it, but I suggest tweaking one e to make it look more handwritten. Normally it wouldn't be so noticeable, except that they're right beside each other. It's the only imperfect thing that I noticed about this logo.

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logomotive Nov. 30 '07

I CAN relate, I mostly get asked to design %22illustrated%22 logos. :-) I guess it can be a good thing and sets you apart from the rest.

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logomotive Nov. 30 '07

Bart ya know I love yer excelllent stuff but agree perhaps a smidget to the right?

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admarcbart Nov. 30 '07

Yeah I think I am going to rework the Capital F a tad. I agree after looking at this online. Great ideas guys.

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admarcbart Nov. 30 '07

Updated with some minor tweaks from ideas above and my own thoughts.

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firestorm888 Dec. 02 '07

I would love to receive anything with this logo on it - could also work for a pie or candy company. Exquisite.

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drewboy Dec. 03 '07

Bart - really good colour scheme (as usual!) - I see why you have made the 'm' into a stalk, but it now looks too much like an 'h' to me. That plus the 'an' %26 I read 'Freehand' - but maybe I'm just too old... I agree with Ryan that the 'ee's are too similar. If you make one look slightly different it will be spot on.

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mintidea Dec. 28 '07

What's the type on this logo for Freemans? is it Handsome Pro?

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