Luka Balic Design

by balic • Uploaded: Sep. 29 '11

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Description: This is first of two versions for my personal logo. Logo is made of initials of Luka Balic Design. I wanted to incorporate feather in logo because feather was first design tool. Second version here: http://logopond.com/gallery/detail/148262 Help me choose the right one. Your comments are very wellcome, thanks!

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ubishere Sep. 29 '11

Yep this is the better version of the 2 imo.**Should the tip of the feather be slightly more pointed?*

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balic Sep. 29 '11

If I made the tip thinner it wouldn't be visible when I scale down the logo, and I need it to be clearly visible because it forms the %22B%22 letter.**Thanks for comment!

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nathantrafford Sep. 29 '11

I think you have an opportunity here to make something nice. I would forget the L, as 'Balic Design' sounds better anyway. I like the shape of the feather here, but don't know if it's enough to represent the B if you get rid of the L. I would play with maybe another two small parts of feathers or something to fill the space where the holes of the B would normally be.

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balic Sep. 29 '11

I like the way you're thinking about the B letter.*I'll try that but I think D won't be visible if I put away L.*And I also like how this shape is closed with L, without it would look open. But I'll try what you suggest anyway.*Thanks!

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cerise Sep. 29 '11

I prefer this one mate.

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dulesaga Sep. 29 '11

I like the concept, but i think you need to work a little more on the fether part. For example the white line cutting in the tip of the feather is bearly visible, on smaller sizes it will desapier.

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balic Sep. 30 '11

Thanks on comments guys!*@dulesaga - I didn't want the line to be too visible (to distract).*But I guess I should make it little bit thicker.Thanks!

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aviat- Sep. 30 '11

Out of the two posted I'd have to say this one hands down. Definitely the most original approach out of the two.

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Jorge Codina Sep. 30 '11

Hey, thanks for your comment. I think this is a better version of your logo. i think it's make better reading.**regards**Jorge Codina***PD: My english is not very advanced, sorry

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jands Sep. 30 '11

this looks pretty good :) What about of making an L a bit smoother ?

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orca design Sep. 30 '11

Yeah this one is our favourite Balic. I agree with jands though, perhaps a more organic L would be more suitable? Nice work though.

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balic Sep. 30 '11

Thanks everyone for comments!**@nathantrafford : The %22D%22 letter is made of L and the feather.**@jands and @orca : Thanks for suggestion, I'm trying out some variations.

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mosti Oct. 01 '11

My favorite %3B)

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Type and Signs Oct. 03 '11

agree ... my favorite too !

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Mason Roberts Oct. 05 '11

My favorite toooooo! :) I think just simplify the 'Luka Balic Design' to just one font and you'll have a winner.

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Sean Heisler Oct. 07 '11

Sorry for the late reply here, Luka! I agree with the others here, I like this one best. I love the implied D shape, really nicely done in that hidden sort of way that you discover!

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