Hollenbeck - Premium Quality Meats

by aaronharms • Uploaded: Sep. 14 '09

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Description: The Hollenbecks are a small, family-owned and -operated farm that sells the best quality meats, which includes beef, lamb, and pork. They sell their meats at farmer's markets, restaurants, and in gift packages to friends and families.
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OcularInk Sep. 14 '09

I like your approach to using utensils as the two L(s) in Hollenbeck. It's a great start. Since the utensils have so much detail, I'm thinking a serif font would compliment more effectively. The sans serif just isn't working for me. Also, you don't need the lines outside of the subtext...kind of distracting. Finally, I think the subtext can be reduced in size and slightly further away from Hollenbeck. Hope this helps!

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aaronharms Sep. 14 '09

Thanks Ocular. I like the idea of using a serif font for Hollenbeck. Like you said, it would match the detail of the utensils better. I'll try that out.

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