by VenetaR • Uploaded: Jun. 15 '12 - Gallerized: Jun. '12
The logo is for a children's psychology center that works with 5-10 year-olds to cultivate their natural creativity.
Status: Client work
Tags: mind • chick • deer • creativity
B&W - check :) Now the more I look at it, I'm not sure the chick's feet are ok. Perhaps a bit too short.Reply
Cool concept. I think you could simplify both animals though, especially the bird.Reply
Great concept! I totally agreed with Sam.Reply
Thanks for the input guys. I think it's much better now :)Reply
Yeah much better (but if you asked children, I'm sure, they would tell you the opposite)! The bird is sitting on the type, why isn't Bambi standing on it? (just a proposal) :)Reply
Hem.. I see now, its not Bambi... it got some horns. :DReply
Yep, Bambi is more of a deer, while this is an antelope.
The thing is even though the center is for kids, it's actually the parents who are the target. So it has to be something in the middle, appealing to both kids and adults.
Lovely idea and well rationalised ^Reply
^ I agree! It works well.Reply
One suggestion. Maybe ever so slightly rotate the bird's body anti-clockwise so that it looks more curious about the antelope too which might make it look less static. Either way, I love this, and I keep coming back to look at it :)Reply
Good subtle suggestion.Reply
And easier to do than the Antelope :)Reply
amazing concept here.Reply
it's bloody perfect.Reply
Bird is now curious too 10x to Gareth :)
And the client seems to be leaning towards this as a final, so I really appreciate all your help!
@Mike: I wish all clients asked for such subtle and easy alterations instead of changing concept direction all the time :)
Well done, cool concept.Reply
I don't want to be the bad boy here and the gallery entry (congrats!) implies, that I am wrong, but I think, that it still can be better. I don't understand - for example, why the antelope is floating, while the bird is not. I tried to see, if there is some perspectives, which may lead to a raised position of the antelope, but there is no.
I can imagine well, how the legs of the antelope would emerge from the word 'curious', maybe on the empty letters a bit of grass etc. Something, that lets the whole composition melt together.
Anyway... my daughter (6) said, its sooooo sweet. :)
I actually tried that out when you suggested it, but it looked kind of busy, so I left it the way it is. The more clear space, the better, IMO :)Reply
Alright... thanks for the answer! :)Reply
I think it's fine. I just imagine or see the Antelope/Gazelle standing back a bit deeper almost as if your looking at it from a worms eye view.Reply
agree with Mike. the gazelle gives the logo a little depth by not touching the text.Reply
great balance in this one! very niceReply
That's how I saw it too, Mike. It's cool too how the dot on the i kind of looks like a pebble or a rock. Just adds to the scenery. Nice job with this!Reply
great illu! :)Reply
Endearing, simple and beautiful. Great job!Reply
I love this, so cute and one of those unforgettable marks :)Reply
When a logo puts a smirk on my face, it means you have struck a chord, at least with me. Well done with this logo.Reply
love your logo styles and typo!Reply
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Sweet. Give us a B/W version!Reply