10 Yard Lime

by SamStephen • Uploaded: Jul. 08 '13


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Description: Academic Work, Fictional business. Design Brief: Business is a downtown sports bar known for it's lime infused beer and large televisions. Target audience is men, ages 21-40.
Status: Student work
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Tags: mark combination typeface Kabel

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Sam Stephen Jul. 08 '13

I'm looking for critique so if you have any suggestions please let me know! Thanks :)

samdemastrie Jul. 08 '13

Interesting look. Initially I had a little bit of difficulty because the lime shapes below the type almost looked like letterforms. I would recommend simplifying that area to match the aesthetic of the football shape above the type so it's easier to read. Also, the drippiness, I would probably contain that to the lime area or the type, not both. Probably keep it off the type so it's easier to read.

Sam Stephen Jul. 08 '13

Thanks @samdemastrie

I agree with all of what you said... I'm gonna try and simplify the lime and work on the drippiness!


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