WIP

by S.vanElderen • Uploaded: Jul. 13 '10 - Gallerized: Jul. '10

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Description: A WIP for a costum interior designer. Monotone is up here to and the colors are based on materials
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Tags: stripes designer interior savael
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JF Jul. 14 '10

Nice placement of mark w/type. Not only is it balanced (proprtional, proper) but the arrangement is eye-catching. Good work.

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S.vanElderen Jul. 15 '10

Thanks Jf,*I was pooling for the right place, and i thinking that maybe I'm gonna center the mark and place the name on the same side and Hight

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S.vanElderen Jul. 15 '10

Oh and thanks for all the floats :-)

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logotivity Jul. 16 '10

well deserved floats, nice job..

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helvetic brands Jul. 17 '10

I really like the design. If you haven't already tried, I would recommend reducing the amount of lines by 50%25 and increasing the contour weight 2 fold as it may give more stability to the design.

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helvetic brands Jul. 17 '10

Seeing it in small, perhaps remove the white sections all together.

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S.vanElderen Jul. 17 '10

thanks for the advice David :-) (if it's okay to call you by your first name), On this one I allready reduced the amount of lines and I was wondering if more was needed that's why I posted the WIP with comments allowed. Thanks, I will definitely check it.

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S.vanElderen Aug. 09 '10

Prommised to update, I tried the 50%25 less stipes and here is the result. I'm staying with the old design.**%5Bimg%5Dhttp://farm5.static.flickr.com/4135/4876766578_fda0ff67ae.jpg%5B/img%5D

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